Beekuna: pokemon creepypasta sprite and small story

[venomjack]

here's a quick sprite I made and here's an even quicker story to go with it.
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Well I recently got what seemed to be a pirated version of pokemon red from my friend who mentioned some weird glitches such as his clefairy using Whirlpool through Metronome. I've just gotten to Viridian forest and decided to use this time to catch a caterpie and weedle. I walked through the grass when I came across a strange weedle. I looked like how weedle would look ingame except for some missingno style bits around it. Out of curiosity I caught the weedle and gave it a go. at first it seemed to play like a regular weedle, and began to believe that it was just a simple graphics glitch......... until it evolved into a kakuna. like before it looked like the regular kakuna but with missingo pixels only this time the pixels looked like they were seething through the shell of kakuna. When I got kakuna into battle I'm surprised how easily I was able to beat every pokemon I fought in the forest, I even beat a pikachu with no trouble. I decided to take this kakuna more of challenge and battled at the pewter gym. To my surprised it was handling the campers like nothing. I managed to take on Brock and beat him. After winning the match Kakuna began to evolve. I thought that Kakuna's power increase would no longer be active if it evolved into a Beedrill so I stopped the evolution.......... big mistake. As I stopped the evolution a major monstrosity of pixels appear on my screen. it had the the upper torso of Beedrill halfway covered in Kakuna's shell, it's lower half was none existent only having missingo pixels which sickly reminded me of dripping blood. It's head seemed to be half kakuna and half beedrill. the mistake had one the upper piece of a beedrill's wing and where the other wing should be was just some more missingo pixels. After seeing what came of this I shut off the game and threw it out.
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I didn't put any effort in the story I hope you still enjoy seeya!

[Coey890]

Very good, except for throwing it out at the end and pressing B to stop it's evolution.
Would've been cooler if the Kakuna somehow didn't want to evolve and held on to some of it's previous traits, but you wanted it to evolve so it could be more powerful than before, but due to your greed, the Kakuna is now a freak of nature.

The sprite was very high quality and looked almost exactly like something you'd see in Red and Blue.

Still, good job! It made for an interesting read and the sprite was pretty sweet, too.

EDIT: Or if it said "KAKUNA is trying to RESIST" "RESIST" "RESIST" "KAKUNA is IN PAIN" and then "3... 2... 1... POOF! KAKUNA has forgotten EVOLUTION!"

EDIT 2: And instead of the normal fanfare playing, a distorted cry that sounds like a mix between Kakuna's and Beedrill's plays.

[venomjack]

Originally Posted by Coey890

Very good, except for throwing it out at the end and pressing B to stop it's evolution.
Would've been cooler if the Kakuna somehow didn't want to evolve and held on to some of it's previous traits, but you wanted it to evolve so it could be more powerful than before, but due to your greed, the Kakuna is now a freak of nature.

The sprite was very high quality and looked almost exactly like something you'd see in Red and Blue.

Still, good job! It made for an interesting read and the sprite was pretty sweet, too.

EDIT: Or if it said "KAKUNA is trying to RESIST" "RESIST" "RESIST" "KAKUNA is IN PAIN" and then "3... 2... 1... POOF! KAKUNA has forgotten EVOLUTION!"

EDIT 2: And instead of the normal fanfare playing, a distorted cry that sounds like a mix between Kakuna's and Beedrill's plays.

meh I was running out of time while writing it, so it really isn't my best work

[ElSiberianHusky]

Aww, why turn it off? Beekuna looks cute.

[Lockdown738]

That's a really good story, and very believable to. I don't know what I would do if I was playing a video game and weird, scary stuff started to happen.

[Coey890]

Originally Posted by venomjack

meh I was running out of time while writing it, so it really isn't my best work

Yeah, I know.

I was just saying the things that could've been improved upon.

You still did a good job though.